I've never liked sushi,
I don't try to bike uphill,
I let my hair knot in the summer wind,
I'd let a man front the bill.
I drive too close to the wheel,
and i listen to country music
cause it has taught me how to feel.
I'm always the first to laugh at smiles,
I'm the first to cry at screams,
I do my best contemplating on sidewalks for miles,
I do my best sharing when someone touches my skin,
and i listen to country music
to learn who to let in.
I am terrible with numbers,
I think in letters and poetry,
I dont lack excitement or enthusiasm
I really struggle with clarity.
and you are a man-
from a country song,
without the boots and hat
but this is the real world,
so we can do without that.
i love it nikki
ReplyDeletei agree about the ending tho...
I am not sure
towards the end it sounded like the rhyme was maybe controlling you
more than you were controlling it but once i start rhyming i can never stop so kudos to you for daring
I LOVE LOVE LOVE the Im the first to laugh at smile and cry at screams thing
so beautiful and i think it's even a fancy pantsy litrerary device of come sort
I'm Impressed!